Saturday, 3 December 2011

Weak too

1.
asking is useless
observe truth: life's one pattern
five inside seven

2.
there was a dog who wasn't there
sitting down upon the stairs
he wasn't there again today
gee I wish he'd go away!

3.
that the form of the haiku directly influenced its content should be obvious. I suspect that the form of the haikus is taken from what my poem alludes to. the pattern is within sunflowers, pine-cones, pineapples, and countless other forms in nature. It is the way the muscle of the heart twists and beats, and it is the path a vortex takes to become a toroid. the path light takes to self refer. who knows its true significance? Maybe the japanese poets of old.

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